TARA.. Star


When Darknss... - Poem by TARA.. Star

When the waves at night strike the seashore,

When the darkness falls on the roads

When the silent is observed in all homes,

At that time, my friend is all home alone

Although darken nights make her afraid,

But prayers of her friend make her saved

She always wore a smile on her face,

& has turned the dark nights into bright days

Courage and confidence are part of her personality,

She has turned her dreams into simple reality

Her braveness even when she was blue,

Made me realized my dream has come true!


Comments about When Darknss... by TARA.. Star

  • Gold Star - 4,576 Points Is It Poetry (5/7/2009 6:28:00 PM)

    I feel the passion ebb and fall as soft waves touch a shore in reach of...iip (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 20 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/5/2009 5:58:00 AM)

    i find your poetic sturcture lovely /vivid /the theme/message is neat to read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Sarah Abdullah (1/31/2009 2:56:00 PM)

    Fine lines..
    Lovely Meanings....
    It takes alot of courage to keep standing against Blue days.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Barbara Terry (1/27/2009 1:32:00 PM)

    And all it takes is courage and confidence to turn our dreams into reality. Thank you for sharing this well written message of hope and stability. A 10+

    Love & hugs,
    Barbara (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 27, 2009



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