When Dreams Shatter Poem by Ruby Mostazir

When Dreams Shatter

Rating: 3.4


Your hand holds her hand
Her
hands
colored by
henna &
glitter!

My empty hands seems so gloomy
When
my
dreams
break &
shatter ……..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Money 21 May 2013

I enjoyed it.....it left me wanting more.......

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Kanav Justa 31 December 2013

it hurts when the dream that you care for, , , is dying rite in front of your eyes, , , nice write, ,

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Khairul Ahsan 27 September 2013

A beautiful poem! Short but eloquent.

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Heather Wilkins 27 September 2013

dreams break and shatter leaving us with empty hands lovely write sad but so true

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Farah Ilyas 25 May 2013

Touching & moving poem......a journey from happiness to sadness comes in everyone's life but entertained by only few people, same happens when dreams are shattered....well pinned

1 1 Reply
Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 May 2013

A broken heart that shatters the dream for new dream

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