When Galaxies Cry Poem by Sonya Annita Song

When Galaxies Cry

Rating: 4.5


When galaxies cry,
The tears that they shed
Are showers of light we see overhead
That leave us in awe
As we touch our cheeks,
Speechless but listening
When radiance speaks.

So gaze at the sky
When stars shoot above
And hear as they make their statements of love,
For they long to be heard
In the vacuum of space,
Stardrops streaming down
A celestial face.

Friday, August 30, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: tears,beauty,space,stars
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 01 September 2013

An excellent poem, very soothing.10/10 Welcome you to PH, this being your first poem here.

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Diana Rose Tolentino 03 September 2013

I tried reading it aloud and it leave in awe. I like the measure and rhyme of this poem. Salute to you Miss Sonya.

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Shahzia Batool 05 September 2013

Nice...this can be the first posting but not the first writing, one can see the mature lines so meaningful...

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Soulful Heart 05 September 2013

a celestial bliss of that feeling of solitude under the stars.............perched on enchantment...........good read

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Soulful Heart 05 September 2013

Perched on enchantment.............the solitude under the stars................well wrtiten

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Wonderful poem. A great calm descends on the heart after one has read this and contemplated for a minute.

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 March 2018

So gaze at the sky When stars shoot above And hear as they make their statements of love, .great imagination, , , , , , , , , you are really conversing with the stars in the sky....... such a fine imaginative poem.. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Tajudeen Shah 09 May 2014

exceptionally enthralling, endless excellence is evident in every expression of this engaging effort. God Bless.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 04 December 2013

amazing words for amazing poem the imagery so awesome the flow so alive 10/10 bravo

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Bri Edwards 27 November 2013

you are a superstar! to MyPoemList! i especially enjoyed: That leave us in awe As we touch our cheeks, Speechless but listening When radiance speaks. this poem IS radiance. but don't get too sure of yourself; i haven't read another one! will there be more i wonder? thanks for sharing. ;)

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