When He.. Poem by Brianna Trombley

When He..

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When he looks at me
I feel caught in his gaze
But soon look away
Eyes glued to the ground, unable to raise

When he smiles at me
I feel chills run up my neck
This moment we’re lost in
I know, soon I will wreck

When he says my name
I get weak in the knees
My heart starts to flutter
Im begging him please

When he touches me
Electricity rips through my skin
Something that I’ve held dear so long
I wish to give to him

When he kisses me
I pinch myself to wake up from this dream
I cant believe im here with him
His eyes full of love, I find my self esteem

When he holds me tight
I know that im all he wants me to be
every time im in his arms
I feel so complete

When I look at her
Shes the only thing I see
Nothing in this world
Could mean more to me

When I smile at her
I see how timid she gets
Which always takes me back
To the day we first met
When I say her name
Its like a beautiful song
Being with her
I can no longer prolong

When I kiss her
I never want it to end
Shots through my heart
Somehow she sends

When I hold her tight
Its my attempt to protect her from pain
My happiest moments
Are when im her umbrella in life’s rain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Wonderful poem...... Very thoughtful.... I love the ending.... ~KRISTA~

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Matt Burgett 02 February 2009

Your stuff is so happy within the prime of possitiveness its hard to find decent natural tallent anymore that isnt spoiled

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, , , , , , 17 January 2009

oh i like it i especially love that last paragraph every girl wants that kind of love

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Little Morning Star 09 December 2008

that's the true feeling that we feel to someone we love.. great poem..

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Ridge Cahill 09 December 2008

Touching and warm. I like the duality of the piece very much.

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Kimber Harrison 08 December 2008

One of my Fav. of yours! It kinda reminds me of The Song of Solomon....awesome job!

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