When I....... Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

When I.......

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When I laugh
I hear the music of the soul.

When I read
I gain fountain of wisdom.

When I think
I feel the source of freedom.

When I play
I get back the perpetual youth.

When I love
I get love the gods given privilege.

When I pray
I realise the power on me.

When I give
I made my day selfless.

When I work
I attain the price of success.

When I listen
I could understand things better.

When I question
I get umpteen of answers.

When I rest
I do the best of all the best.

Wednesday, March 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: readiness
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Unnikrishnan E S 19 November 2016

When you smile, the world smiles with you. But when you cry, you cry alone!

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 April 2016

Laughter is the music of he soul! Nice piece of work.

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I think nowadays even people think a lot to smile, thank for the review

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Kishore Kumar Das 31 March 2016

each of the aspects of life need attention....good thought..

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Readiness to learn the niches, paves the right path, thanks

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Anil Kumar Panda 30 March 2016

Very nice. There is something to learn from every action. Nice.

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True learning n is a never ending treasure, thank you dear friend

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