When I Close My Eyes Poem by Debora Short

When I Close My Eyes

Rating: 3.1


Allowing the tinkling
Romance to dance
Ethereally into eternity

His
Fingers floating,
Caressing spells
Across those ancient ivories
With the inspiration of Chopin

My mood no longer
Entrenched in worldly
Black
And white
Realities

Only
Gentleness
Tickling my soul
Royal peacock feathers
Flirting
And
Charming
In fullest delight

Sipping
Champagne’s
Sweetest bouquet
Inebriating
Lover’s paired - hearts

A shower
Of purest
White
Rose petal’d
Messages
Ensue
The dancer’s
Embrace
Chased
Into magically
Mystical
Ecstasy …

(The Mountaintop Cabin
December 14,2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 27 August 2007

An envelope of ecstasy My mood no longer Entrenched in worldly Black And white Realities Only Gentleness Tickling my soul I would love to read another one of these Thankyou Love duncan X

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Joan Cambias 27 December 2006

Absolutely beautiful. I wish I had found your poems months ago. You are an inspiration........No wonder you are always giggling...... Nonie

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Sandra Fowler 15 December 2006

What an enchanting poem. It is always good to know that romance is alive and well. Warm regards, Sandra

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