When I Dreamed Poem by Prasad Natarajan

When I Dreamed

Rating: 5.0


The windows of my body slowly close,
Abandoned in a garden full of red rose,
Walking amidst gentle flowing stream,
Golden yellow cutting through sun beam.

Lush olive green leaves of the huge trees,
Dusty brown grass growing up to my knees,
Breathing warmth in the fresh new air,
Walking through pastures on my foot bare.

She walked all the way holding my hand,
Time was slipping away like quick sand,
Her voice was so filled with love and care,
She was gentle, shy, sensitive and very fair.

Her light blue eyes like waves of the seas,
Touching us, eloquently moved the breeze,
Words not spoken, we spoke a lot it seemed,
I walked, I lived and I fell in love when I dreamed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kranthi Pothineni 09 November 2009

Hallow the body as a temple to comeliness and sanctify the heart as a sacrifice to love; love recompenses the adorers.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 September 2021

CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as The Poet Of The Day TODAY Monday 1 Sep 2021 No others space to inform you and that's why I write it here, just to INFORM you

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 September 2021

5 Stars full for this nice rhymed poem, and so seet in rhythm.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 September 2021

In Dreams we speak all things we do not dare when being awaken, so very true!

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Dr.ram Mehta 01 January 2010

'Words not spoken, we spoke a lot it seemed, ' conveys everything

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 09 November 2009

nice write here........................

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