When I Finally Shed This Body Poem by Patti Masterman

When I Finally Shed This Body



When I finally shed this body,
I'll be light as a wisp of an angel,
Inviolate as a fairy's potent kiss,
Quick as the velvet wings of a moth.

Like ancient dust from old paper-mache,
Or a husk of cocoon wavering away;
The vaporous draught of some mystery,
(The hidden vesicle of living flame)

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Hans Vr 03 July 2012

I like the title very much. the poem makes me think of butterflies The choice of words give something magic The message is intriguing

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Eric Cockrell 22 June 2012

and you will finally be free!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 19 June 2012

Are you talking about the soul or the body or something else?

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Captain Cur 19 June 2012

Your words did a good job of shedding their body and creating the image. Great poem celebrating the spirit that inhabits us all.

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