When I Let Go Poem by Hazel Connelly

When I Let Go

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A guiding light to illuminate the way
I'll follow the light to seal my fate
The spirit of me to reawaken.

Yesterday I let go of what I am today
I hold the key to unlock the gate
To change the path that I have taken.

Today I accomplish what I set out to do
With ambition I set out the program
There's always a choice you see.

Tomorrow I set out on paths anew
When I let go of what I am
And become what I might be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roy Toddington 07 November 2011

Love your structure of rhyme - abc, abc, def, def - nice one!

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