When I Look At You Poem by Rohit Sharma

When I Look At You

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When I look at u..

I see the whole world
In your beautiful eyes...
The life seems so aesthetic
Everything feels so nice! ! !

When I look at u..

I feel u r someone
Who'll always b there...
No matter how the time unfolds
U will always take care! ! !

When I look at u..

I feel u love me
From the depth of ur heart...
We r together 4ever
We will never be apart! ! !

When I look at u..

I feel stronger to see
You standing by my side...
You r the ultimate for me
Feelings tell me; i m right! ! !

When I look at u...

I wanna tell you
Sweetheart, how much I love you
You are the reason for my happiness
and I'll always be with you! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The Lost.. 20 June 2010

I wanna tell you Sweetheart, how much I love you You are the reason for my happiness and I'll always be with you! ! ! can you tell someone how much you love her/him? ? this is great it touched me :) keep writing

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Mesmerising love! Beautifully penned.: D

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Alicia Moore 29 June 2010

Some1 will lose words, just standing and staring if u said this 2 them and yes wassila he can say i love you 2 some1 i believe that: ]

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Gan Chennai 01 July 2010

Excellent Rohit! I have become old. But anyhow, I will Try some few Lines like you...... When I look at u.. Time Comes to Standstill Who said 'Time and Tide wait for None? ' Is Innocence other name for your face? Is Beauty a Synonym for You? Ha! Ha! Ha! It took Quarter Hour to write Four such Lines.

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Amrit Rathi 02 July 2010

You are a great love poet. With subtle variations, you win the reader's heart(and of course, heat of your sweetheart!) . Thanks.

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Stefanie Fontker 13 July 2010

This poem would have been have been much more effective had you written it in full English, nevertheless another amazing composition. Love is something to ponder.

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Anita Trivedi 13 July 2010

Wow i can say she will be very lucky girl who you will give your heart......... Again a beautifull poem........10

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Unwritten Soul 03 July 2010

Love this lovely love poem...mmm, she is so lucky having a soul mate like u!

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Pooja A 02 July 2010

Captivating.......Romantic. Oh rohit I'm speechless! ! ! ! ! ! ! Just wanna wish u & ur loved one all the nature's treasure........ the storehouse of her joys, the highest heaven of pleasure, the bliss which is pure & God's blessings 4ever....

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Aastha Uppal 02 July 2010

beautifully explains the purity and sanctity of love.. seems really simple but thats the most difficult.. how the mere presence of your loved one can make you feel that you are blessed.. nice one there! ! !

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Rohit Sharma

Rohit Sharma

Amritsar, India
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