When I Think Poem by Evelina kononenko

When I Think

Rating: 3.5


When I think
the sun opens up and gets warmer.

When I think the clouds move slower
so I can remember.

My life is like an ordinary girl
without no one beside me.

When I think
the trees whoosh quietly.

When I think
the book opens up.

When I think
the grass grows greener.

When I think
birds sing quietly.

That's when I think of my life

Sunday, May 24, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 23 May 2014

Girls of your age are not expected to do much of pensive thinking, but I am glad that you do it. And when you do it, you have beautifully described what you see and feel about life. 'the sun opens up'and gets warmer.' 'the clouds move slower' 'the trees whoosh quietly.' 'the book opens up' 'the grass grows greener.' 'Birds sing quietly' - Are some of the things that happen when you 'think of my life'. These are nice, poetic thoughts. Best wishes, keep writing!

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Barbara Sallee 18 June 2009

Evelina. Another fantastic write, your material just keeps getting better and better my friend. i will be back to your site that a for sure. your friend in poetry Barbie

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