When I Told You I Loved You Poem by Poetical Analysis

When I Told You I Loved You



When I told you I loved you I was lying

You said it first & I played like I was trying

To merely respond to your expression of pure gratitude

I masked my meaning with a nonchalant attitude

But behind my eyes & within my mind

What I said & what I meant weren't really intertwined

They was as different a day from night

As the brilliance of the sun & the moon's hallowed light

I chuckled inside like a child

My most devious self was running wild

I told you I love you with a coward's soul

Now, I feel like I'm dying from mining for gold

Yes, I feel like I'm dying from mining for gold

10/23/16


(I guess: lyrics taken from the song Mining For Gold)

Sunday, October 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: courage
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San Fernando Valley, Los Angeles, CA
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