When It Just Won'T Poem by Timothy Branch

When It Just Won'T



Different never happens, when it just won't.
Different outcomes never happen, when it just won't
Without resistance, endurance, and persistence competition idly stands by.
Competition is a fighting adversary of ones fear.
Wrestling spoils from clinced fists, just won't happen when
Fear has ensnared you.
Orders to fight a fixed fight come directly to you.
But echoes of frightening voices, oppose you.
Footsteps multiplied by the stillness of quietness magnify visions of your loss. Fearful of questions
Those voices kill you.
Stifle your will to struggle and win.
Fear wins.
Awaken, do so quickly.
It just won't happen unless you breakthough.
You must move beyond the sorrowful, critical faces of men.
If you don't it just won't happen.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 19 March 2013

Okay poem. Try combining some of the sentences into one, and use when it just won't a little less or reword it a bit. It has a good point.

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