When Life Is At The Cutting Edge Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

When Life Is At The Cutting Edge

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When life becomes meaningless
no matter what you do seem useless
and all opportunities you grab wasted
broken dreams lurking with self busted
everything you hold on now starts to fall
drags you feel pushed against the wall
realization of life is at the cutting edge.

When life becomes the darkest
no hope of light makes you weakest
and things you touch soon are dead
failure always cling to you instead
you try to survive from uncertainties
yet your ego succumbs to all the vanities
Doubt overcomes self to feel the cutting edge.

Though life becomes vague
Do not give up to fight the plague
For quitters do not win any endeavor
Hang on lit the ember to light you with fervor
For as long as you have the courage to go forward
Then no amount of deterrents can make you a coward
And in the end you will be able to override the cutting edge.

Thursday, June 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Fear
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 10 June 2014

Great write with a beautiful message.... Marvin! However hard life becomes, if we have the will left in us to fight and jump over the obstacles, we might meet with victory at the end. Life is not meant for those who easily quit from a difficult scene!

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Marvin Brato Sr

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Davao City, Philippines
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