When Opposites Attract Poem by Soul Writer

When Opposites Attract

Rating: 4.8


Does he love her

Does he not? ? ?

He puts my mind a knot


His actions just confuse her

But his words just give her bliss

And she urges to give him a tender kiss


She give him gifts

She give him love

And her heart flutters like a white dove


Yet she receive no gifts

Nothing comes from the heart

Yet she yearns for him to set his mark


The mark of love

That define her life for all time

She just wants him 2 say, 'will u 4eva be mine'


Now she wonders

Do i love him... do i not

Shes sending her mind a knot


She will never give up

No matter how deep the pain roots

All she wants is to be Mrs Dupes


***Written for Laura***

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Night Fang 24 April 2018

This is a good poem I give my thanks to u for writing this

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John Nightingale 10 January 2008

Well written. Liked it a lot. Thanks.

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Marvin Brato 10 January 2008

Thats it.. when opposites attract? Yes by principle it do, in this poem i think its the opposite! Nevertheles, its a good poem. a 9.

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