When Rain Is Unwelcome Poem by indira babbellapati

When Rain Is Unwelcome

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The cloud at the horizon
Hung dark; an over laden
Piece of sponge precariously
Holding the water on earth
The pavement hawkers
Looked askance at the sky
Carefully counting the paltry change
Hidden under the tattered cloth...

No, it did not rain
No, it did not rain

The pavement sighed in relief!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 June 2013

Rain spells pain for so many, but that's true for all sweet things. A different view and an astounding poem laced with irony.

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Anamika Jalan 30 June 2013

nice poem mam i like it very much

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Chandra Thiagarajan 29 June 2013

An excellent poem to indicate how the pavement hawkers abhor rain from their point of view!

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Yasmin Khan 29 June 2013

Rain has different effect on different people, not always poetic. You say it well sympathetically in a terse copmosition.

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Shahzia Batool 27 June 2013

it's the grim side of the monsoon, the romantic mood of all seasons!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 June 2013

Welcome things are unwelcome sometimes. Nicely put here.

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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