indira babbellapati

Rookie - 71 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

When Rain Is Unwelcome - Poem by indira babbellapati

The cloud at the horizon
Hung dark; an over laden
Piece of sponge precariously
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Comments about When Rain Is Unwelcome by indira babbellapati

  • Rookie Anamika Jalan (6/30/2013 8:48:00 AM)

    nice poem mam
    i like it very much (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 962 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (6/29/2013 10:03:00 AM)

    An excellent poem to indicate how the pavement hawkers abhor rain from their point of view! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,014 Points Yasmeen Khan (6/29/2013 3:45:00 AM)

    Rain has different effect on different people, not always poetic. You say it well sympathetically in a terse copmosition. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,417 Points Shahzia Batool (6/27/2013 1:30:00 AM)

    it's the grim side of the monsoon, the romantic mood of all seasons! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,228 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/25/2013 6:35:00 AM)

    Welcome things are unwelcome sometimes. Nicely put here. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (6/25/2013 4:28:00 AM)

    Rain spells pain for so many, but that's true for all sweet things. A different view and an astounding poem laced with irony. (Report) Reply

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