When The Heart Meets The Soul Poem by Shasha Mesha

When The Heart Meets The Soul

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Spooned or swindled?
The ephemeral heart questioned the eternal soul,
For only the soul can quench the thirst of the beautiful lie,
A lie that she heavily relied upon,
And she continued to sprinkle water of hopes on an intricate garden,
It blossomed swiftly and the sight was phenomenal,
Leading to a mysterious yet quintessential path of flowers,
With petals of sunflower tickling her silky feet,
She was convinced that the fragrance had coiled within her,
And then rose a new question,
Should she continue to merely sprinkle or assume a luxuriant garden of her own?

Thursday, September 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 18 September 2015

I found your poem very mysteriously fascinating and enticing! Lending hope and a future idea blossoming within the soul! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Nisha Nair 18 September 2015

I'm glad you found it fascinating RoseAnn, thank you. I always try to add a sprinkle of mystery into my poems.

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Kelly Kurt 17 September 2015

A lovely, well written piece, Shasha

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Nisha Nair 17 September 2015

Thank you Kelly

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Fabrizio Frosini 17 September 2015

''Spooned or swindled? '' a good question, indeed.. ;) WELCOME at PoemHunter, Shasha

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Nisha Nair 17 September 2015

A question that remains a mystery to me. Thanks for the warm welcome Fabrizio

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 September 2015

The soul is eternal. and the heart earthly and perishable. only the Soul can quench. Water of hopes, mysterious path of flowers. so these are the points i collected while studying your poem. a really very nice work and mysterious too. thank you dear Poetess. write and write.

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Nisha Nair 17 September 2015

That's a good analysis. Thank you Tony

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