When The Winter Strip Trees Poem by Gert Strydom

When The Winter Strip Trees

Rating: 5.0


When the winter strip trees, uncovering them to naked,
where they stay behind like stripped skeletons
with only here and there birds remaining,
the secret of survival is still hidden,

even when it becomes icy cold,
doves and sparrows still fly past.
When the winter strip trees, uncovering them to naked,
where they stay behind like stripped skeletons,

it is looking as if the season is making an assault
on everything living, nothing can escape it,
there are still flowers blooming,
as if protected against the cold they are keeping watch
when the winter strip trees, uncovering them to naked.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 June 2011

Great poem with brilliant imagery and wonderful style. I rate it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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Gert Strydom

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Johannesburg, South Africa
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