When This World Poem by Neela Nath Das

When This World

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When this world be without wrong
Human voice will sing a song.
peaceful place for us and all,
excluding words- rise and fall.
Put your ears to love and peace,
Not a single life to miss.
God has made us with his care,
willingly he makes thing fair.
If we hate, each other thus,
forming hateful fighting mass:
Blinding other taking eye,
whole nation will simply die.
Let us build a happy race,
None will find there envy's trace!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 17 September 2012

Great philosophy expressed in this Nil, good one.

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Unwritten Soul 17 September 2012

This is calm when there is shaky in the ground..nice write_Unwritten Soul

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Joseph Anderson 20 September 2012

Your dream, my dream-will we, at our ages ever see it? A passsionate plea of hope-well rendered Glad to have found your site, your writings are uplifting and stimulating

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Vipins Puthooran 19 September 2012

Let us build a happy race! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! really a great poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Eindaray Kyaw 18 September 2012

I do enjoy your poem.... When this world...really attracting title! !

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Dcfizban@hotmail.com Cadywold 18 September 2012

I like that poem, stirs my feelings about humans and the planet.

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Sanjay Mehta 18 September 2012

Your longing for utopia, I pray to THE be the longing for us all. This desire is embedded in all his creation, may the same be 'usurped'. by all. AMEN.

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