Neela Nath


When This World - Poem by Neela Nath

When this world be without wrong
Human voice will sing a song.
peaceful place for us and all,
excluding words- rise and fall.
Put your ears to love and peace,
Not a single life to miss.
God has made us with his care,
willingly he makes thing fair.
If we hate, each other thus,
forming hateful fighting mass:
Blinding other taking eye,
whole nation will simply die.
Let us build a happy race,
None will find there envy's trace!


Comments about When This World by Neela Nath

  • Rookie - 391 Points Joseph Anderson (9/20/2012 11:44:00 AM)

    Your dream, my dream-will we, at our ages ever see it? A passsionate plea of hope-well rendered
    Glad to have found your site, your writings are uplifting and stimulating (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 249 Points Vipins Puthooran (9/19/2012 7:32:00 PM)

    Let us build a happy race! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    really a great poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eindaray Kyaw (9/18/2012 10:27:00 AM)

    I do enjoy your poem....
    When this world...really attracting title! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Dcfizban@hotmail.com Cadywold (9/18/2012 8:07:00 AM)

    I like that poem, stirs my feelings about humans and the planet. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sanjay Mehta (9/18/2012 1:07:00 AM)

    Your longing for utopia, I pray to THE be the longing for us all. This desire is embedded in all his creation, may the same be 'usurped'. by all. AMEN. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,358 Points Unwritten Soul (9/17/2012 10:48:00 PM)

    This is calm when there is shaky in the ground..nice write_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,284 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (9/17/2012 4:28:00 PM)

    As I read this I can only wish, but wishes sometimes do come true. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,024 Points Valerie Dohren (9/17/2012 12:24:00 PM)

    Great philosophy expressed in this Nil, good one. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 17, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 18, 2012


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