When Two Things Transform Poem by Emmanuel George Cefai

When Two Things Transform



When two things transform
The one to the other goes
Vice-versa too
The two become as one
Intermittent restless
Interchangeable
Ever-transforming evolution

Friday, August 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: transformation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 18 August 2014

You have concisely and tightly expressed an idea I too am very convinced of, that is, the ceaseless transformation of the things outside and also inside of us, It's hard to find the words that will express this idea both directly and clearly, but I think your poem does a very good job of just that. Of course, it's couched in general language, almost like a philosophical statement. It would be interesting to write a parallel poem in which you embody the theme in imagery.

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