When You Held Me Poem by Reshma Ramesh

When You Held Me

Rating: 4.9


When you held me,
To your chest,
Arms around
In embrace
Broad shoulders,
Scent so sweet,
There with you
I wanted to
Weep, bundle
Myself into
A heap, joy I
Felt so deep,
My ears against
Your heartbeat,
Our world turned
Into a capsule
That is when
My dear darling,
I was certain
God had heard
My prayer again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 05 October 2008

a romantic scene of love divine penned well in God's guidance...happy to read this.

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Zia Eybers 09 October 2008

Gave me a wonderful warm feeling reading your words....sigh....just what I needed. Tx

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 10 October 2008

Very touching and real poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Sadiqullah Khan 10 October 2008

God! make my embrace as warm as you wish reshma, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,10

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Thad Wilk 10 October 2008

A delightful read Reshma! Truly captures - the heart! ! *10*! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Marvelous poem 10++

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Sebastine Humaemo 20 November 2008

lines full of meaning and love....thanks for sharing

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Rudy Hossam 21 October 2008

lovely words with lovely meanings and strong emotions thanks a lot for sharing

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 14 October 2008

Very high emotional composition.............good*10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 October 2008

This poem is short, sensuous and sensible too...but not as fascinating as others I read today..........I give.9

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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