When You'Re Gone Poem by rhona fabi

When You'Re Gone

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My feet carried me and I wander
On the bay, could somebody tell me,
Why I'm there?
The leaving sun, it's not there!
I wanna see it but where?

I'm always there at the bay..
For nights or even days..
I just wanted to find some ways.
Can I see you tomorrow or today?
If not, maybe someday?

Your eyes, your face is what I miss.
Crazy I'm still reminiscing your kiss!
Fool maybe I am to feel this
that I can put anything at risk
Just for you my missing piece!

When you're gone, I dealt
tomorrow, myself I'll kill!
Like a dense one, nothing is what
I feel
Could somebody rescue me and heal?
From what I had become
that has never been my will!


Copyright © 2008 by Ronalyn 'Rhona' T. Fabi
(An original poem written on the 3rd day of March 2008.)

(This literary piece is govern with the rights of the author. Anyone who wants to use this poem should first ask the author or contact at reiyuucy_26@yahoo.com)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 03 August 2009

well expressed poem full of emotion....nice

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Scarlette Romero 29 July 2009

What a nicely written poem.. I really enjoy readin it! thank you for sharing.

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