When Your Eyes Say- I Love You Poem by sarwar chowdhury

When Your Eyes Say- I Love You

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a.
When your eyes say- I love you
Cheers make a just bloomed the blossom beautiful……..Along with scents of this awe-inspiring creation spiriting me up…..I see, people surrounding me ascertain- I am touched by something wonderous….Oh! Luculent the fact exact…… I become nothing but an enchanting entity my dear!

b.
When you transmit the pictograph- I LoVe YoU
A bright way of light between you and me make link…..Photons are devoted to rejoice on and on…….Colours are in motion….Oh what a restlessness! ......Am lost… Am stimulated…..Discover myself in the electromagnetic waves……..My beloved! You the awesome…Hence me become a bundle of photons…… I do nothing but emit light upon you that has reflected from you my dear..Longing for your loving touch endless….. I read your surprises even reducing my breathe!

c.
When you say- I love you
I see- flowers, butteflies, birds, rivers, green nature, mountains, sky, rain, sea, waves, dawn, dews drop, days, sunshine, nights, star's sparkle, moonlit, lives, prayer, hard-work, stigmas, summer winter autumn, spring, the world, the universes, all are multiphase meaningful, cheerful beautiful! Because, You say-
I
Love
You!

d.
When I know I am loved, a ‘sweet pain’ kiss my heart
In love ‘soothing sad’ a must, for time things fall apart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 29 July 2009

vow complete chemistry of love written in physical terms. wonderful. are you in love? voted 10 surya

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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 July 2009

The body and spirit of love so exquisitely described. Lovely poem on love

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Sakthi Ravichandran 31 July 2009

Nice poem to read excellent words you have taken All the best keep it up your lines of attractions are a. When your eyes say- I love you Cheers make a just bloomed the blossom beautiful……..Along with scents of this awe-inspiring creation spiriting me up…..I see, people surrounding me ascertain- I am touched by something wonderous….Oh! Luculent the fact exact…… I become nothing but an enchanting entity my dear! saktheee s ravichandran

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 August 2009

Cheers make a just bloomed the blossom beautiful……..it is simply lovely poem with very good words in advice forms.. i liked it....10 read mine brown eyes.. two bright eyes.....anywhere and buttterflies around

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Meggie Gultiano 02 August 2009

a lovely write indeed.You made it more beautiful by the lovely words you said. I love this.. Meggie

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 October 2009

Like proliferated love and metastasized every cells. Excellent love morphology. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita Cordially invite to my page

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

I do nothing but emit light upon you that has reflected from you my dear. Rachel Ann Butler

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 15 September 2009

‘…Hence me become a bundle of photons…’ Object identified into subject. Nice addressing Ten+ dr. sakti

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Shilesha Johnson 20 August 2009

this IS very romantic i agree.. i loved your choice of words, and iwouldn't have been able to say it better myself....nice poem

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Uriah Hamilton 11 August 2009

Love can be both beautiful and sad, pleasant and painful. Insightful write.

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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