Where Are You? Poem by Goodenough Sakhile Dlamini

Where Are You?

Rating: 4.8


I am about to do something stupid
I am about to lose my mind
I am about to lose hope
I am about to get over this
I am feeling lonely
I am felling left
Where are you?

All alone no calls, no miss calls, no messages.
All alone missing you, thinking about you.
All alone wonder if you still love me
All alone trying to sleep aloneness life
All alone trying to not break your heart
All alone wonder if you are lonely too.


Where are you?
My love, my heart is going down...
I will write you a letter maybe it going to be better
My heart without you it like letter without address
I can't do anything whenever I think about you
But it hurt my heart that I am feeling lonely
But it hurt me that it looks like you have forgotten me
But it killing me soft to not see you around
But it stabbing my heart that's I don't hear your voice


Where are you?
That's hiding games love isn't good for me
I've tried a little longer to imagine my life without you
No, no, no I failed, it failed even a second
That's thought doesn't have a place in my heart
My heart is your place, so please just take care of your place
This feeling doesn't want to go away
I am feeling like I am a lone in this world
Its look like they see that to me
My love I am all alone…
Where are you?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Johnathan Juarez 17 September 2012

i really like it thanks for sharing your unique voice

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thank you to all poets iam feeling proudly of myself and greatifull for my fellow poets....................

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So Close 12 September 2012

its pretty good and i like very much the lines Where are you? My love, my heart is going down... I will write you a letter maybe it going to be better My heart without you it like letter without address I can't do anything whenever I think about you But it hurt my heart that I am feeling lonely But it hurt me that it looks like you have forgotten me But it killing me soft to not see you around But it stabbing my heart that's I don't hear your voice keep writing...and also invite me to read your poems..: -) ]]so close[[

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Alexandria Angel 06 September 2012

I love it very much thank you for sharing

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Anamika Goswami 04 September 2012

Sakhile, very poignant lines depicting a lovers seeking for his beloved. Beautiful.

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