Where Are You, My Beloved? Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Where Are You, My Beloved?

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Are you in that little paradise,
where my childhood is still playing hide and seek
waiting for butterflies to arrive
a kite to fall from sky and run with urchin to catch
and you cheering from behind to go get it….

Or hanging in the same garden
where the shrine of virtue has been placed in your honour,
and upon which you offer my heart and soul as sacrifice?
to become larger than life and obey world’s norms.

The darkness has swallowed the bright lights
Turning night to show the last moon light
And you are hiding somewhere behind the stars
Before the dawn breaks, let you and me share it again.

Wednesday, September 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 12 January 2016

Running as waters the rythm and the pictures following it.

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Edmund Strolis 13 December 2015

Your poem starts in such a simple manner and opens up to such a grand and deep question. Beautiful heartfelt and personal words. Splendid

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T Rajan Evol 09 September 2015

Little paradise a catchy place for childhood, shrine of virtues for adulthood and darkness swallowed for old age...great metaphors.......Your are a brilliant writer. Hats Off...10+++

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M Asim Nehal 11 September 2015

T U So so much..

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Sanjukta Nag 09 September 2015

Very heart touching... wonderful flow of emotion... thank you

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M Asim Nehal 11 September 2015

T U so very much.....

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