Where By - - Vms Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Where By - - Vms

Rating: 4.8


Our portion of life is too brief to live!
Amidst long lasting sorrows, meaning less sufferings....
with short lived care, love and happiness! !
No one knows what's our destiny..? ?
But only longs for a tear less LIFE! ! !

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Kelly Kurt 16 February 2016

A very good poem, V.M. The extra punctuation at the end was too much I think. Thanks for sharing Peace

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a lot of thanks, sure to work on it, i am blessed

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A nice write on what life means.Like it.

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Khairul Ahsan 22 July 2016

Endless search, yes, life is just that! A wonderful search, a beautiful poem.

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Thanks dear poet for the review, though search differs from person to person it is endless and at times meaning less too, welcome sir

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Tommorow is certain, But, life tommorow is not certain. Well written mam, thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2016

Too brief to live! Because, NO ONE KNOWS TOMORROW. Nice piece of work.

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Endless search, thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 February 2016

No one knows what's our destiny..? ? But only longs for a tear less LIFE! ! ! why should we suffer? can we not always be joyous? why there is no love, why life breaks all our expectations? so many questions..... no answer. life and love is a mystery. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Lovely, u got the real feel, thks

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