Where The Freer Delicate Birds Are Destined To Fly? Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Where The Freer Delicate Birds Are Destined To Fly?

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Please make a significant mark on the seamless pale blue sky
As the marvelous invisible Master painter who never leaves at least a brush mark for them to see the road?
My dear fragile birds it's advisable to fly in the daylight.
Oh! This horrible night sky, do you think the proud star would guide you or the haughty moon would have a kind word with you?
Though the Sun is cruel or prodigal,
Anyway he gives you the light equal as a parole to see the opaque destination.

* [A wingless migratory bird flies towards the Syrian sky in search of the poetess Suzie.Gharib.As a formality, does the responsible authority inquires the relevant papers from this biting bird? ]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 15 May 2008

Superb poetic language in this one - in particular '...the invisible Master painter who never leaves at least a brush mark' You combine powerful emotions and beautiful images in this melancholy poem dedicated to your friend Susie. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 05 May 2008

Lovely title.. One could think of Susie as a delicate bird destined to fly. Her elegant poetry is not replacable on this site. Love and remembrance until we are in touch with her again. Thank you, Nimal for your eloquent words. Ten for you and ten for Susie. Always your friend, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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