Rick Elpers

Rookie (12-24-54)

While She Slept - Poem by Rick Elpers

Coyotes yelping in the distance
Crickets chorusing in the yard
Silent is the air, stilled by
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Comments about While She Slept by Rick Elpers

  • Gold Star - 5,686 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (8/23/2014 10:04:00 AM)

    your muse is very lovely and loving..nature at its best and the world sings a song in one's heart.. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 14,297 Points * Sunprincess * (8/23/2014 9:21:00 AM)

    ............really like the first stanza....poems are more beautiful when nature is described so nicely, as you have done in this poem.....enjoyed... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,066 Points Lyn Paul (8/23/2014 6:16:00 AM)

    And dream of our conversation
    To envelope us completely. What a beautiful line. Thank You Rick. Like the title too. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 28,245 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/23/2014 4:17:00 AM)

    Beautiful description of memories rising like smokes from ashes of past wherein fire of love has extinguished but ashes are hot enough to inspire for creation. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,975 Points Hazel Durham (8/23/2013 1:07:00 PM)

    A beautiful, serene scene of an evening in reflection of your beloved in such an endearing way! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,912 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/23/2013 1:42:00 AM)

    happy to smile your love, good write, thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (8/23/2012 6:32:00 PM)

    A lovely peaceful write of that rarity of tranquility and adoration embraced.... (Report) Reply








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