Whisky In Oval Glass Poem by Udaya R. Tennakoon

Whisky In Oval Glass



Oval glass
Like your waistline
Touches my fingers

Whisky in it
Pretty hard
Soften with
Swing ice cubes
Glitters with cold

Sipping by lips
Like your tits
Taste in love
Fuddled feelings
Slowly lie down

Your glance
Being an image in it
Concavely looks at
While filling up
With another ice cube

Desire reminds
Like talking your eyes
In a short time
Empty glass
Looks at me

In a moment
I stand up
And go for a cigarette.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetheart Morgan 03 October 2012

. then you get out of an addiction and falls for another? ? Beautiful Poem

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Sankaran Ayya 29 September 2012

Oval glass Like your waistline Touches my fingers -holding a whiskey glass is like holding a pretty waistline.Both are highly intoxicant Whisky in it Pretty hard Soften with Swing ice cubes -nice lines How about other intoxicant? Lips for cubes? Your poem will tempt even a teetotaler. Nice poem. Best wishes Uday -KAVIN CHARALN

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