(january 27,1953 / pasaleng, pagudpud, ilocos norte)

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Whisper

i heard
the whisper of the thunder
and in silenced my dreams
shouted a deafening murmur
of a love gone wild
at the river of no return.
there was the brook
where the moss cling
and watch the beating of the heart
float to the hideaway of forgotten melodies
of a love gone astray
in the wilderness of lost emotions
i heard the silent protests
of souls gone weird
frozen on the valley of death
where the bloodshed eyes let bitter tears
be the nourishment of the dry sand
blown by the winds of constant change
i was left unmoved
my feet got numbed so i just looked
for stars in an starless nights
where the clouds hide the aspirations of a heart
forgotten how to be cared and loved
there was again
the whisper of the thunder
that deafened my heart
and the souls cried
for a love lost in the maze of the stars
in solitude i heard the whisper
of the thunder that shattered the dreams
within my heart
i was laid in a coffin
where distant whispers of lives gone
cried and murmur
once there was this love
borne out of mute whispers
lost in the roar
of deafening silence.

Submitted: Tuesday, October 30, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, October 31, 2012


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  • Asif Andalib (11/20/2012 10:56:00 PM)

    Lovely metaphors. Good poem. I like it

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  • Marieta Maglas (10/31/2012 2:18:00 PM)

    The last lines are beautiful......thank you for sharing this poem

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  • Aung Si (10/31/2012 8:57:00 AM)

    borne out of mute whispers
    lost in the roar
    of deafening silence.
    Great idea indeed! Keep it up! ! ! !

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