Whisper Poem by villiamor calventas

Whisper

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i heard
the whisper of the thunder
and in silenced my dreams
shouted a deafening murmur
of a love gone wild
at the river of no return.
there was the brook
where the moss cling
and watch the beating of the heart
float to the hideaway of forgotten melodies
of a love gone astray
in the wilderness of lost emotions
i heard the silent protests
of souls gone weird
frozen on the valley of death
where the bloodshed eyes let bitter tears
be the nourishment of the dry sand
blown by the winds of constant change
i was left unmoved
my feet got numbed so i just looked
for stars in an starless nights
where the clouds hide the aspirations of a heart
forgotten how to be cared and loved
there was again
the whisper of the thunder
that deafened my heart
and the souls cried
for a love lost in the maze of the stars
in solitude i heard the whisper
of the thunder that shattered the dreams
within my heart
i was laid in a coffin
where distant whispers of lives gone
cried and murmur
once there was this love
borne out of mute whispers
lost in the roar
of deafening silence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Asif Andalib 20 November 2012

Lovely metaphors. Good poem. I like it

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Marieta Maglas 31 October 2012

The last lines are beautiful......thank you for sharing this poem

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Aung Si 31 October 2012

borne out of mute whispers lost in the roar of deafening silence. Great idea indeed! Keep it up! ! ! !

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villiamor calventas

villiamor calventas

pasaleng, pagudpud, ilocos norte
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