Whispered Secrets Of The Unknown Poem by Louise Brown

Whispered Secrets Of The Unknown



The trees whisper a secret
As I sit here on the grass
The secret is like a beautiful glass vase
But still it shall not last

The secret is a melody
Given only to those with ears
So I sit here and I listen to there many fears

Now I sit here and I wonder
Does anyone care?
For if there’s a beginning
Surly there’s an end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Brwn 26 July 2009

that is a beautiful poem, short and true. well done

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Nicky Turner 07 June 2007

good few typo's typo's: secrete = secret unown = unknown beautiful keep up the work you have real talent, it will be interesting to see what you come up with next.

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Satan's Sibling 25 June 2006

Short but sweet. And so true. BTW, It's spelt 'Secret.' SGM

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