Whispers Poem by Hayley Pullen

Whispers

Rating: 4.5


The whispers in my head ask me questions
they help me solve issues
they give me advice on everything

the whispers are evil
they suggest things,
I dare not think about
I try to block them out,
but the more I try
the more they scream

they are taking over my thoughts
I cant go against them any longer
I do what im told
but still they scream

they want full control of me
they drag me into the dark
im blind but I can still see
clearly my actions

its no longer me,
its them
they do what they please
because I cant stop them

I want it to end
I want them gone,
their scream to quiet

I force it to end
I let the energy leak out
until there is no longer a sound in my head
not a bad thought, not a question, not an idea
nothing is in my head and longer
not even me

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this when my life took a turn for the worst and I slipped into a deep depression. I wrote many similar poems but this one was special. I showed all the pain and loneliness I felt during those times.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Seale 18 June 2013

Hayley... This is an intense write.. I have a similar experience inSilent Screams ; -) Kelly.

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success