Zoe L Mathias

Rookie (08/04/1988 / Wales)

Whispers Of The Wind - Poem by Zoe L Mathias

The Tree stands tall,
Listening to the Wind,
Whispering its cautionary tales.
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Comments about Whispers Of The Wind by Zoe L Mathias

  • Rookie Gerald Mccandless (12/21/2008 3:32:00 AM)

    As so often happens when the number players is limited, the options for meaning just get blown wide open. Is the tree being bent by the wind or, the wind being bent by the tree.


    You are the Wind,
    (And) so I shall be the Tree,
    Never fear, dear friend, I shall listen to thee.

    Is this and effectively coupling the characters or delaying the development of your meaning? (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 122 Points marvin brato (12/17/2008 4:09:00 AM)

    Z ealous principles of virtues
    o ften guide us all to prevail
    e ven in times of tribulations! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (12/16/2008 10:56:00 PM)

    you're solid as a tree, love will stay deeper and closer.........always intact.Good job Zoe! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points _____________________________________ - (12/16/2008 10:31:00 PM)

    Yet I shall not bend,
    To your valiant assumptions,
    To your hollow allegations

    'valiant assumptions' 'm bowled over! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Whitney Nicole Albright* (12/16/2008 10:06:00 PM)

    That's great. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply








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