((((((((((((((((((((( Whispers Tonight))))))))))))))))))))))) Poem by Dr subhendu kar

((((((((((((((((((((( Whispers Tonight)))))))))))))))))))))))

Rating: 3.4


soul smooches by the grace of embrace
relics of mankind yet being baffled by blue
where history fails to accord all portraits
mystically redounding in whispers of tonight

I do remember thrills by curves of colors
speckles of rainbow sprinkling over hue of blue
heart seems to mills through the fragrance
swaddling across mango grove in completeness

jingling of Florence by the touch of breeze
from other side of shore calls on buoyancy
cosmic resplendence diffuses across the green
over thrums of passion drinking scarlet of wine.

speckles beauty rivets on rungs of ocean`s wave
joy intoning inebriates looking into the blue moon
yet eyes rack on riffling through half muffled veil
warmth of blood mills through vein resonating

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

My heart did cart wheels landing in the lush wonder of this beautiful poem...Ah!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 27 January 2009

This is a crack writes.

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Chitra - 29 January 2009

a mellufluos write with resonant metaphors

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Nimal Dunuhinga 30 January 2009

Not only for Tonight, the gentle whispers forever it seems!

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Ramona Thompson 30 January 2009

Well done. A lovely work on a lovely day. Thank you for sharing, R

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 November 2009

Gallery and imagery galore and gate-way to splendorous ambience which is palpable by soft heart Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite you read my poems with comments and….please watch out new posts niv

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Terry B 12 February 2009

Wow...you are truly a gifted writer. You have such a way with words, leaves the reader in awe. Takes one away for awhile. Just pure beauty.

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Chandra Ramsahoi 11 February 2009

HI, THE WAY YOU DESCRIBE NATURE IS AMAZING.I CAN CLOSE MY EYES AND DRIFT INTO THIS BEAUTIFUL PICTURE PAINTED BY WORDS. GOOD WORK, HAVE A GOOD WEEK GOD BLESS,

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Lalitha iyer 09 February 2009

Dear Dr., Your portrayal of nature's beauty, the nuances of shape, colour, fusion and inner emotions are extremely nice. The delicacy of appreciation is more lovely. Nature's beauty by way of all five senses and more is very deeply interesting thing. We eye the figurative beauty, touch the softness of the form, hear the harmony and rhthymn, taste the smell and juice and feel the breeze brace our skin. Is it over? oh no. The inner body is made up elements of minute ether particles or whatsoever.....With every thought of positive energy vibrating simultaneously with the sight, sound, taste and touch the inner body is filled with richness and life and it responds and without ourselves knowing we are elevated to spheres of unknown lands of astral sublimity. Your words are refined and melody is musical. Yet, if you could use simple words or just write the meaning of the words of difficult nature below your poem, everyone could paint the scenery alongwith with the intake of verse, so that full enjoyment is possible.

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Lalitha iyer 09 February 2009

Dear Dr., Your portrayal of nature's beauty, the nuances of shape, colour, fusion and inner emotions are extremely nice. The delicacy of appreciation is more lovely. Nature's beauty by way of all five senses and more is very deeply interesting thing. We eye the figurative beauty, touch the softness of the form, hear the harmony and rhthymn, taste the smell and juice and feel the breeze brace our skin. Is it over? oh no. The inner body is made up elements of minute ether particles or whatsoever.....With every thought of positive energy vibrating simultaneously with the sight, sound, taste and touch the inner body is filled with richness and life and it responds and without ourselves knowing we are elevated to spheres of unknown lands of astral sublimity. Your words are refined and melody is musical. Yet, if you could use simple words or just write the meaning of the words of difficult nature below your poem, everyone could paint the scenery alongwith with the intake of verse, so that full enjoyment is possible.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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