Pia Andersson

White Pain - Poem by Pia Andersson

White pain
questioned me,
never my actions.
Allowed laughter,
but never joy.
Ate me up from within.
Leaving nothing,
not even my selfpity
to protect me.

White pain
reduced me,
robbed me,
of what was once mine.
Leaving me
with blank fingertips.

I realize,
that the road
I will take,
will change.
The map
will not be found
this time.

let your love
shine through me.
Give me peace.
Lead me back
to myself again.

Let me be Yours
and let me be me.

Comments about White Pain by Pia Andersson

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (5/24/2012 11:58:00 PM)

    The poem poses a problem and ends with a solution! Very nice poem :) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 12,145 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (4/21/2010 7:25:00 PM)

    The expression white pain itself is very original.
    laughter without joy,
    blank fingertips.
    your conviction that it will change, and final prayer to God.
    it is very nice dear pia. God bless you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tony Fiona (12/9/2009 9:51:00 PM)

    a wonderful expression of the pain of self doubt and guilt
    well written
    tony (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Luis Gil (12/9/2009 5:02:00 PM)

    You are so right..... The pain that leaves you numb.... Without hope.... When nothing can possibly be the same again.

    Yes, that pain is white. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (10/26/2009 1:54:00 AM)

    Great poem, very powerful. I liked especially these words:
    '.........not even my selfpity
    to protect me.' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Akram Awadat (10/25/2009 2:10:00 PM)

    great work, well done (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 940 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (10/16/2009 4:22:00 PM)

    great poem....................... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Linda Weischedel (12/23/2007 2:36:00 PM)

    Absolutle an amazing write about pain,
    and the love you have for God!
    Awesome poem, I give you a 10 for this.
    Linda (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (10/13/2007 6:21:00 AM)

    Your every word sparkles your love for God. That shows your divine heart and loving nature. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 634 Points marvin brato (10/1/2007 11:48:00 PM)

    Any pain blue or white is enough to make us ponder and recollect.... for without experiencing pain we can not learn that we are human who got varied emotions. Thanks for sharing, top mark. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 569 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (9/14/2007 3:53:00 PM)

    The earthly love disillusioned, , , , , , , , , , yet asking for the love divine, Pia- it is beautiful, i love it, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Milda Morse (9/14/2007 2:54:00 AM)

    Quite an excellent poem. It speaks of a love lost and frenzy of mind. A cry for love and togetherness. Well done. Milda (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Broken Peaces (9/11/2007 11:23:00 AM)

    God will help you, your friends will help you and i will send you a map to the
    Morvan Chrisx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ghost Writer (9/9/2007 8:21:00 AM)

    lovely poem. keep writing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 9, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 6, 2011

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