White Pain Poem by Pia Andersson

White Pain

Rating: 4.3


White pain
questioned me,
never my actions.
Allowed laughter,
but never joy.
Ate me up from within.
Leaving nothing,
not even my selfpity
to protect me.

White pain
reduced me,
robbed me,
of what was once mine.
Leaving me
with blank fingertips.

I realize,
that the road
I will take,
will change.
The map
will not be found
this time.

God,
let your love
shine through me.
Give me peace.
Lead me back
to myself again.

Let me be Yours
and let me be me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ghost Writer 09 September 2007

lovely poem. keep writing

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Broken Peaces 11 September 2007

God will help you, your friends will help you and i will send you a map to the Morvan Chrisx

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Milda Morse 14 September 2007

Quite an excellent poem. It speaks of a love lost and frenzy of mind. A cry for love and togetherness. Well done. Milda

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Dr.subhendu Kar 14 September 2007

The earthly love disillusioned, , , , , , , , , , yet asking for the love divine, Pia- it is beautiful, i love it, thanks for sharing

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Marvin Brato 01 October 2007

Any pain blue or white is enough to make us ponder and recollect.... for without experiencing pain we can not learn that we are human who got varied emotions. Thanks for sharing, top mark.

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Simone Inez Harriman 03 November 2015

I feel your loss and heartache in every word.....10

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Rekha Mandagere 24 May 2012

The poem poses a problem and ends with a solution! Very nice poem :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 April 2010

The expression white pain itself is very original. laughter without joy, blank fingertips. your conviction that it will change, and final prayer to God. it is very nice dear pia. God bless you.

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Tony Fiona 09 December 2009

a wonderful expression of the pain of self doubt and guilt well written tony

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Luis Gil 09 December 2009

You are so right..... The pain that leaves you numb.... Without hope.... When nothing can possibly be the same again. Yes, that pain is white.

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