Who Am I? Poem by Green Peace

Who Am I?

Rating: 5.0


Who am I?
So happy but shy
Can I not hide my good deeds
And confess the sins I have committed?
For if I do so I will be hated.
Who am I so great?
That cannot follow, the truth's weight,
Who am I so proud and jealous?
Do I know the courteous principle?
Have I served the poor and old?
No moment for them, but rude enough
in this material world.
Why am I so selfish and miser?
Have I fulfilled the needy's desire?
Who am I so short tempered and greedy?
Have I always spoken the truth and
remained in purity?
Whatever sins I have committed O Lord,
Forgive them and help me to remain
Spotless in this material world.
Let me each day do something that will
remove little sadness from the world's vast store.
Lord, I am but a small boat, buffeted by waves
Floating on the ocean of your mighty shore.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Who am I? So happy but shy Can I not hide my good deeds And confess the sins I have committed? well timed question? beautiful write.. i love it... well deserved 10 read mine ' I am disgrace and Mary to marry

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 24 September 2008

The best thing about this poem is that it is sincere and true to heart. Thank you.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 September 2008

here words emitting earnest endavour towards truths........10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 September 2008

A marvelous composition. Last two lines are so touchy! 10++

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Ershad Mazumder 22 September 2008

Very good desire.Very simple expression. More than 10 marks for you.

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