Who Am I? Poem by Kurt Behle

Who Am I?

Rating: 5.0


I...
I wish not to be
A Sad guy, who cries at night
The Desperate man, who sees no light
A New boy, who has no name
The Different person, who is to blame

I...
The Happy guy, who wears a mask
A Dumb man, who nobody ask
An Innocent boy, who knows not much
Stained person, who lives with a metal crush

I......
Weak guy, who lives without might
The distant man, who nobody sees
Frightened boy, who stays out of sight
A lonely person, who nobody wants to kiss
I AM...
I
Not to be...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Taher Al-Shemaly 22 June 2009

Great writing with rhyming.... I think this piece is a bit philosophical...... needs a cup of coffee and some thinkin' while reading... Great job!

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a well thoughtful poem..

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simple yet captivating messages...thanks best regards, jdh

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DaNa XxX 23 June 2009

a very well thoughtful piece..! ! and yea it contains some wonderful wisdome..! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..... i liked it! ! ! ! <3 10+++++++++ form me and a flower @; - keep it up ^^ yours DaNa... ^_^

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Fay Slimm 22 June 2009

This poem contains some great wisdom Kurt - - appicable to all eras and especially to todya - - if we keep in mind some of these pointers we wont go far astray - - thanks for the reminders.....10/10 from Fay.

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alice sunderland 22 June 2009

well said! well written! hey we got the same birthday!

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Johannes Yeboah 22 June 2009

Beautiful poem, Kurt...i love it! !

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