Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 31,384 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Who Is She - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A ten years old child,
Wrote a poem on a girl,
Described the curls,
Of her silky hairs,
And the roses she had,
In the pinkish white cheeks,
And the rhymes she sang,
In her lovely voice!

The poem became,
A headache for the boy,
Somehow it was read,
At home by the elders,
His brothers and sisters,
And the parents too!
Everyone asked him,
Who is she?

The boy never replied,
And just smiled,
On a birthday of the boy,
She came at his home,
And the love of the boy,
Was now exposed!
The naughty younger sister,
Recited the poem.

And when his sweet class mate,
Listened to that poem,
She asked the boy,
Who is she?

The boy lost the smile,
With tearful eyes,
She looked at the girl,
When the eyes were met,
She returned the tears,
An amazing moment,
When she appeared,
A grownup eve.

She came to him,
And embraced her friend,
With birthday greetings,
And the shirt of the boy,
Was wet with tears,
Of innocent souls!

The boy hid the shirt,
Unwashed and intact,
Still it is kept,
At a secret place.

Years then passed,
An old man when retired,
Being tired of his life,
Saw again that shirt,
And whispered to himself,
Where is she?
How is she?
Having no reply,
The old man exclaimed,
Who is she!


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Love is always innocent if it is love.

Comments about Who Is She by Akhtar Jawad

  • Gold Star - 10,448 Points Amitava Sur (11/18/2014 11:30:00 AM)

    A beautiful love poem with emotion and with a melancholic note. So sweet it is that touches heart. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,448 Points Amitava Sur (11/18/2014 11:30:00 AM)

    A beautiful love poem with emotion and with a melancholic note. So sweet it is that touches heart. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,750 Points Salini Nair (11/18/2014 2:22:00 AM)

    sir is this your story? anyway each line is coated with love....nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (11/15/2014 3:14:00 PM)

    this is a beautiful but somewhat sad story well crafted I give this a 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,978 Points Khalida Bano Ali (11/15/2014 10:54:00 AM)

    The boy lost the smile,
    With tearful eyes,
    She looked at the girl,
    When the eyes were met,
    She returned the tears,
    An amazing moment,
    When she appeared,
    A grownup eve.
    Amazing lines...............10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 15, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 15, 2014


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