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Who is the King?

I am the Queen
you are my son
abide my dictum

crossing the limit
endanger your life
accept my authority

spreading your wings
searching your mate
putting me in displeasure

your soul bears
my whipping silently
accepts to derail

my son assent
my choice of bride
feel the freedom

secret ambitions
will jeoparadise
your wishes

Oh! my son
I am the Queen
submit to me

playing infidelity
placing me in shame
questions my fame

waiting for goal
breaking the rule
thinking victorious

I am the Queen
you won't be a King
cursing the sin.

Submitted: Friday, July 31, 2009


Comments about this poem (Who is the King? by Mubeen Sadhika )

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  • Brittany Rivera (3/23/2011 7:44:00 AM)

    Excellent poem, Nice writing.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/27/2009 10:03:00 AM)

    am the Queen
    you are my son
    abide my dictum...........the queen is king and does no wrong.she has authority..10

    read mine.......... queen without crown

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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (8/10/2009 9:33:00 AM)

    humm thoughtful and beautiful........> Paiseworthy indeed your style that given new taste!
    10+

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  • surya . (8/3/2009 7:55:00 AM)

    wonderful ideas in short crisp lines.beautiful and meaningful.
    voted10
    surya

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  • Ted M (7/31/2009 11:20:00 AM)

    Well written...........

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  • Kafil Uddin Raihan (7/31/2009 10:26:00 AM)

    Excellent writing....well penned....

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