Mubeen Sadhika


Who Is The King? - Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

I am the Queen
you are my son
abide my dictum

crossing the limit
endanger your life
accept my authority

spreading your wings
searching your mate
putting me in displeasure

your soul bears
my whipping silently
accepts to derail

my son assent
my choice of bride
feel the freedom

secret ambitions
will jeoparadise
your wishes

Oh! my son
I am the Queen
submit to me

playing infidelity
placing me in shame
questions my fame

waiting for goal
breaking the rule
thinking victorious

I am the Queen
you won't be a King
cursing the sin.


Comments about Who Is The King? by Mubeen Sadhika

  • Rookie Brittany Rivera (3/23/2011 7:44:00 AM)

    Excellent poem, Nice writing. (Report) Reply

    2 person liked.
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  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/27/2009 10:03:00 AM)

    am the Queen
    you are my son
    abide my dictum...........the queen is king and does no wrong.she has authority..10

    read mine.......... queen without crown (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (8/10/2009 9:33:00 AM)

    humm thoughtful and beautiful........> Paiseworthy indeed your style that given new taste!
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (8/3/2009 7:55:00 AM)

    wonderful ideas in short crisp lines.beautiful and meaningful.
    voted10
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ted M (7/31/2009 11:20:00 AM)

    Well written........... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Kafil Uddin Raihan (7/31/2009 10:26:00 AM)

    Excellent writing....well penned.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 31, 2009



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