Who Is The King? Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

Who Is The King?

Rating: 5.0


I am the Queen
you are my son
abide my dictum

crossing the limit
endanger your life
accept my authority

spreading your wings
searching your mate
putting me in displeasure

your soul bears
my whipping silently
accepts to derail

my son assent
my choice of bride
feel the freedom

secret ambitions
will jeoparadise
your wishes

Oh! my son
I am the Queen
submit to me

playing infidelity
placing me in shame
questions my fame

waiting for goal
breaking the rule
thinking victorious

I am the Queen
you won't be a King
cursing the sin.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2009

am the Queen you are my son abide my dictum...........the queen is king and does no wrong.she has authority..10 read mine.......... queen without crown

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 August 2009

humm thoughtful and beautiful........> Paiseworthy indeed your style that given new taste! 10+

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Surya . 03 August 2009

wonderful ideas in short crisp lines.beautiful and meaningful. voted10 surya

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Ted M 31 July 2009

Well written...........

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 31 July 2009

Excellent writing....well penned....

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