///Why Poem by akram saqib

///Why

Rating: 4.0


It was you
Deserted me who
It was you
Refused me too
Ignored me all the time
And my rhyme
Hushed me away
Make me stay
In my own craze
For your praise
You were just not
And never thought
Of affections and beauty
Love and duty
Now call me back
When I am on stake
Of the time and rhyme
Of the unknown clime

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravindra Nadiya 29 May 2009

Akram its a really good poem...

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Saadat Tahir 29 May 2009

i absolutely cannot understand somebodies compulsion to rate the poem so low.. its a beautiful poem written very well...its rare that i wish to read a poem twice this is one of them...fantastic write atenner it should rughtly be cheers

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Shams Tahir 23 June 2009

why is a question always unanswered as your poem is! ! !

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OuSs@Ma Samouna 15 June 2009

wow...so wonderful and powerful thanks for sharing keep writing such great poems ++++++10

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Angel's lyre 03 June 2009

good! ! ! you have done a good job!

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Costa Anakiev 01 June 2009

Not bad. I like the rhythm, and it sounds sincere. Konstantin.

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Anna jonson 31 May 2009

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaw..what a rhythm, what a meaning! I am amazed...

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