akram saqib

Rookie - 72 Points (14 APRIL / SAHIWAL)

///Why - Poem by akram saqib

It was you
Deserted me who
It was you
Refused me too
Ignored me all the time
And my rhyme
Hushed me away
Make me stay
In my own craze
For your praise
You were just not
And never thought
Of affections and beauty
Love and duty
Now call me back
When I am on stake
Of the time and rhyme
Of the unknown clime

Comments about ///Why by akram saqib

  • (6/23/2009 7:09:00 AM)

    why is a question always unanswered as your poem is! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (6/15/2009 8:23:00 AM)

    wow...so wonderful and powerful
    thanks for sharing
    keep writing such great poems
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  • (6/3/2009 3:57:00 AM)

    good! ! ! you have done a good job! (Report) Reply

  • (6/1/2009 9:34:00 AM)

    Not bad. I like the rhythm, and it sounds sincere. Konstantin. (Report) Reply

  • (5/31/2009 9:30:00 AM)

    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaw..what a rhythm, what a meaning! I am amazed... (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (5/29/2009 9:39:00 AM)

    i absolutely cannot understand somebodies compulsion to rate the poem so low..

    its a beautiful poem written very well...its rare that i wish to read a poem twice this is one of them...fantastic write
    atenner it should rughtly be
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  • (5/29/2009 9:18:00 AM)

    Akram its a really good poem... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 29, 2009

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