Why Angels Came... Poem by Kateryna Polishchuk

Why Angels Came...

Rating: 5.0


One day The Lord all Angels sent,
To find some love until World`s end.
He looked at us from Holly Sky
And wanted know why people cry.

The Angels passed through our mind,
They didn`t know if love they find…
A lot of loneliness and pain
They saw all pictures from the brain.

But could not find of hearts the warm
Just saw an influence of corn,
Just felt the doom of our dread,
They saw all dreams we`ve ever had.

They saw all people were just weak,
They just existed, didn`t seek
To find the light, because blind eyes
Could not in hearts it recognize.

The angels though they won`t us leave,
Because in saving we believe,
Because we needed them at all,
They did not wait for our fall.

They asked God to send us chance
To stay in love, with angels dance,
To give us warm we`ve lost in fear,
They promised Him of us take care.

So, now all people are not slave,
They reach all dreams their souls crave.
And if they`re lonely, live in tear,
They should remember Angels near.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 10 March 2012

A fantastic poem, like it.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 10 March 2012

A beautiful thought.

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North Wind 11 March 2012

'''And if they`re lonely, live in tear, They should remember Angels near.'' The concluding lines of the poem i like the most....the poem ends with a great note of hope and encouragement....very nice, no, this is, i must say an excellent piece.

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Wahab Abdul 11 March 2012

the way you write poetry...i like it too much...i wish to write like you....and this poem is full wisdom and the ends with a good note ...i like the poem too much and keep writing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 March 2016

They asked God to send us chance To stay in love, with angels dance, To give us warm we`ve lost in fear, They promised Him of us take care... remember, angels are always near. your faith in angels and in a God who takes care of us all by sending angels is marvelous. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Binish Cd 15 March 2012

very beautiful imagination & rhyming too is good...........well written poem.

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Pablo Bautista 12 March 2012

wow! ! just to think they pass though my mind, I feel shame of what they could found haha, , but I feel fine to think they are near, , I like your poem, , yes I like it

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Harindhar Reddy 11 March 2012

What a Magical Stanza is this! I like the poem for it contained lot of hope and has food for the thought for every one young or old. They asked God to send us chance To stay in love, with angels dance, The way this poem was drafted with some mystic power can always inspire us. Hope Kate becomes more popular like William Blake! To give us warm we`ve lost in fear, They promised Him of us take care.

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wow...to stay in love, with angels dance...they passed through our mind, they didn´t know if love they find...they ask God to send us chance...they promised Him of us take care...they did not wait for our fall...because we needed them at all....wonderful..that must been told by an angels at your side :)

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