Why Do The Petals Fall Poem by elysabeth faslund

Why Do The Petals Fall

Rating: 5.0


If I never wrote a poem again...
Would I have lost an audience,
Or just a friend....

Friends count millions,
Audience, a few....
You be the judge...
Your comments are true...

Make them truth...
Make them lies...
Audience? HA!
Friends do not

Disguise.
No intrigue.
No mystery.
Once 'Paraclete'

'Paraclete'
No more.

Petals fall.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 02 March 2008

beautiful like sparkling diamond as when blazed by the light dazzling in colours, yet petals fall when descicated from its stock of love, , , , , , great write, i like it,10+, thanks for sharing

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elysabeth faslund

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