Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 9,023 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Why I Am Stuck Behind? - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Is the clock stopped
Or running behind
Or am I stuck
for the moment.
I dont want this
Moment to go away
As today for
The first time
Someone proposed me.
I felt I am in the
Seventh heaven
I am excited..
What I am doing
In the wonders of the world.....

Cool...
Never go excited
On being neither happy or sad
As I don't know
Which words
May take me to
Heaven or hell.

Standing on ground would be better
Else
Emotions may land me
In nowheres land.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.


Comments about Why I Am Stuck Behind? by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jesse Ellsbury (7/16/2013 1:15:00 PM)

    I really like the progression and language, and the message of being noticed and its effect on our emotions. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,250 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/10/2013 2:21:00 AM)

    emotions from the first proposal surely lands us in nowheres land! great write, poet. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,923 Points Hazel Durham (7/10/2013 1:58:00 AM)

    You have expressed your delight in a wonderful way that captures a great moment! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 226 Points Vipins Puthooran (7/9/2013 12:53:00 PM)

    Seventh heaven-ecstasy/ a good poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (7/9/2013 8:41:00 AM)

    I am in the seventh heaven, good thought, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 31, 2014


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