Why I Am Stuck Behind? Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Why I Am Stuck Behind?

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Is the clock stopped
Or running behind
Or am I stuck
for the moment.
I dont want this
Moment to go away
As today for
The first time
Someone proposed me.
I felt I am in the
Seventh heaven
I am excited..
What I am doing
In the wonders of the world.....

Cool...
Never go excited
On being neither happy or sad
As I don't know
Which words
May take me to
Heaven or hell.

Standing on ground would be better
Else
Emotions may land me
In nowheres land.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Tuesday, July 9, 2013
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jesse Ellsbury 16 July 2013

I really like the progression and language, and the message of being noticed and its effect on our emotions.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 10 July 2013

emotions from the first proposal surely lands us in nowheres land! great write, poet.

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Hazel Durham 10 July 2013

You have expressed your delight in a wonderful way that captures a great moment!

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Vipins Puthooran 09 July 2013

Seventh heaven-ecstasy/ a good poem! !

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Gajanan Mishra 09 July 2013

I am in the seventh heaven, good thought, thanks.

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