Why My Mind Door Doesn't Open Poem by Rhymer Rhymer

Why My Mind Door Doesn't Open

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The eye of your mind doesn't open
Coz you avoid the main principle of creation
In the principle of creation all creatures are interrelated
Air has life
Water has such too
But we corrupt them
And when they are vanished me too
All around you are in web
But I have no love tendency with them.

The GREAT Master of Spiritual Art is sleeping on the Wrapper
Who is he but Muhammad Rasool of Allah
He is the Master of All Spiritual Artists
A cat came and lay to sleep at other CORNER
The master woke up to perform salat
But HE didn't call the cat
The prophet of ANIMAL LOVING just cut the other part of the wrapper
On the other hannd we could easily snub or kick the animal for audacity

Here salat is forj(compusory)such is loving animal
And real lover keeps both compulsion
Humanity or loving animal softens our heart
This humanity-less religion makes our heart HARD
Loveless PRAYER humanity less so it turns heart hard
In our society human loving religion has departed so our worshppings are just exhibition
If anyone recite the holy Quran in sound highly then it is compulsory listening attentively
None cares now
One whose heart is the seat of Allah he never brags

Religion is not a showcase
The fasting that can't abate quarrel
That is the competition of eating
Fasting is to correct once for whole life
Or is it that for purity only for the month
How your door of mind will be opened by god?

Wednesday, November 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: cleaning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 16 July 2019

Mesmerizing poetry..Religion and the ability to love. A very precious subject.Fasting is to correct once for whole life Thank you so much for the translation, otherwise I could not have enjoyed the poem, which is laden and layered. To my opinion An excellent poem about Religion and very Thought provoking. I like it very much!

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Rus Mer 01 August 2019

thank you great of heart! !

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 April 2019

Humanity or loving animal softens our heart This humanity-less religion makes our heart HARD Loveless PRAYER humanity less so it turns heart hard.. Religion and the ability to love and to give go together. great ideas dear poet. tony

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Rus Mer 13 April 2019

thank u so much for reading

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 November 2018

Very nice. Enjoyed thoroughly. Keep up the good work.

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Rus Mer 18 November 2018

পড়ার জন্য অসংখ্য ধন্নবাদ

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 November 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Rus Ger. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Rus Mer 18 November 2018

thanks a lot for reading

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 November 2018

So, lets open the eyes of minds open the sights of insight open the eyes of brains open the sights of thoughts for the sake of GOD for the sake of GOD //// nice poem

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Rus Mer 15 November 2018

so much thanks for reading

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