Treasure Island

hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Why submit to nature?


Why do we submit to nature’s sway?
Consider it casual and attention not pay,
The Sum always rise with powerful ray,
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  • Vijay Suwarnkar (10/9/2009 8:58:00 PM)

    Why I prefer double standard?
    Sometimes inner conscience revolt and bombard,
    Believe in what is told heard,
    Always protective and feared, (Report) Reply

  • Twinkle Vohra (10/3/2009 7:41:00 PM)

    Eyes blind with little energy spark,
    Boats turtle, aground with hit from shark,
    Fear grip the mind with dog’s bark,
    But rest whole body under tree in park (Report) Reply

  • Edwina K (10/3/2009 12:25:00 PM)

    Why do we submit to nature’s sway?
    Consider it casual and attention not pay,
    The Sum always rise with powerful ray,
    Heat waves may burn skin mid-day, (Report) Reply

  • Sadia Hussain (10/3/2009 9:53:00 AM)

    Darkness disappear with mild glow,
    Dews depart with fresh air flow,
    Plants raise head with resolve to grow, (Report) Reply

  • Ramdulari Sinha (10/3/2009 8:05:00 AM)

    Darkness disappear with mild glow,
    Dews depart with fresh air flow,
    Plants raise head with resolve to grow, (Report) Reply

  • Sita Kesri (10/2/2009 11:33:00 PM)

    Darkness disappear with mild glow,
    Dews depart with fresh air flow,
    Plants raise head with resolve to grow, (Report) Reply

  • Venkat Ramanna (10/1/2009 10:31:00 AM)

    There lives wild animal inside,
    Nurturing evils and wrongs beside,
    Not allowing good to surface, (Report) Reply

  • K.v. Subbarao (10/1/2009 8:22:00 AM)

    Not a single soul or children dare play,
    So is the cycle and we always pray,
    Areas we prefer which are always gray, (Report) Reply

  • Radha Seth (9/29/2009 11:15:00 PM)

    Eyes blind with little energy spark,
    Boats turtle, aground with hit from shark,
    Fear grip the mind with dog’s bark, (Report) Reply

  • Saroj Davde (9/29/2009 10:05:00 PM)

    Why do we submit to nature’s sway?
    Consider it casual and attention not pay, (Report) Reply

  • Kashi Paul (9/29/2009 9:20:00 AM)

    Darkness disappear with mild glow,
    Dews depart with fresh air flow,
    Plants raise head with resolve to grow,
    Flowers open up with hot wave blow, (Report) Reply

  • Umesh Lalvani (9/29/2009 7:13:00 AM)

    Why do we submit to nature’s sway?
    Consider it casual and attention not pay,
    The Sum always rise with powerful ray,
    Heat waves may burn skin mid-day, (Report) Reply

  • Santoksingh Jadeja (9/28/2009 11:38:00 AM)

    Darkness disappear with mild glow,
    Dews depart with fresh air flow,
    Plants raise head with resolve to grow, (Report) Reply

  • Rupa Shah (9/28/2009 7:45:00 AM)

    Path barren, rest certain so not to lay,
    Not a single soul or children dare play,
    So is the cycle and we always pray, (Report) Reply

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