Don't think I am a laughing-stock
I will make tonight an epoch
Baby all my limbs want to talk
I want to rock you like hard rock
We are two birds that make a flock
I am tick tock you are the clock
On your heart's door I want to knock
Though I have the key of its lock
You are blackboard my tongue is chalk
I want to kiss you like peacock
And hug you like electric shock
You are my prey I am a hawk
its something different and the words are excellent We are two birds that make a flock I am tick tock you are the clock On your heart's door I want to knock was superb »so close«
Loved it, with amazing lines, so original, inspired write! !
Excellet...! The rhyme is great.. tbh its an owsum one.. ;) keep it up.. (Y)
this is wonderful, i love the rhyme sceem, the metaphors and similies are very vivid, kep it up man
Alright! Expressive, I had to gasp :) Really enjoyed it A man expressing romance, really nice
Woah real wild eh! Electric currents of love do electric shock hee hee. Fun poem with an excellent flow.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
well done m8 nice rhyming