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Manonton Dalan

Rookie - 147 Points (virginia, usa)

Will You Do Same


a lovely fish size of my palm
swimming around algaed-rock
arranging pebbles; very neat
chases anybody that comes close
can't see me i am up the bridge
i am enjoying morning fresh air

heron came with monstrous beak
searching water for early meal
she's coming my way silently
i pick a stone size of a grape
throw it into water. splash
fish is gone so as hungry one

Submitted: Tuesday, August 06, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, August 06, 2013
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  • Freshman - 1,937 Points Lorraine Colon (8/6/2013 1:20:00 AM)

    Well, you deprived the heron of its meal, but you saved the fish's life. Fish will thank you, but the heron will not. Very nice reading your poem. (Report) Reply

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