Win The Battle Poem by Lyn Paul

Very motivational poem, nicely done.

This message has great relevance at a time when people withdraw to their own narrow shells. Opening up and showing the willingness to listen to and care for others makes life meaningful, no matter we win or lose the battle! Let this message ring from all corners! !

Your poem bounds along like a racer. It rhymes and is exciting and doesn't stop for breath. I like it.10/10

We can't change the past, but we can mould tomorrow and turn the world into a better place. Very good Lyn.

A choice to grow in life is very important...An inspirational poem..liked it

Very inspiring and carries great message for all who are really sincere in caring and sharing others...........

So grow and listen to eachothers voices. Understand the need to accept eachothers choices so true, , , ,

We maybe not stand as soldiers but we are in the battlefield to fight the challenge in life, we feel pain but we can still gain..it just about how strong we are inside, we can WIN THE BATTLE Lyn..i like the spirit in you! _Soul

Communication is key, because if you don't understand how can you ever begin to try to accept somebody else's choice.