Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 16,934 Points (17.03.1965)

Win The Battle - Poem by Lyn Paul

Read my words, hear my voice,
Understand in life... There is a choice.
A choice to grow in life to succeed.
Or a choice to burn, just swallow and bleed.
The power is yours. It's about never giving in.
Fighting for life. You need to win.
Winning is not the be all. Yet it is if you need to survive.
And it is if you are feeling... you are no longer alive.
What is it that makes us strong. Then stronger each day?
It is the beauty of life no matter how grey along the way.
Open up and share, Let everyone in,
This is the way, ...the way for us all to win.
Win the Battle of the change of living as the world each day is to grow,
The pure amazement of now..... Now and tomorrow.
So grow and listen to eachothers voices.
Understand the need to accept eachothers choices.


Copyright Reserved May 2014

Topic(s) of this poem: acceptance, believe, life

Comments about Win The Battle by Lyn Paul

  • Gold Star - 17,219 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (6/26/2014 11:51:00 AM)

    Very inspiring and carries great message for all who are really sincere in caring and sharing others........... (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (12/10/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    So grow and listen to eachothers voices.
    Understand the need to accept eachothers choices

    so true, , , , (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,673 Points Unwritten Soul (5/11/2013 6:13:00 AM)

    We maybe not stand as soldiers but we are in the battlefield to fight the challenge in life, we feel pain but we can still just about how strong we are inside, we can WIN THE BATTLE Lyn..i like the spirit in you! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,413 Points Ace Of Black Hearts (5/5/2013 6:19:00 PM)

    Communication is key, because if you don't understand how can you ever begin to try to accept somebody else's choice. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,421 Points Valerie Dohren (5/5/2013 3:20:00 PM)

    We can't change the past, but we can mould tomorrow and turn the world into a better place. Very good Lyn. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,925 Points David Wood (5/5/2013 10:01:00 AM)

    Your poem bounds along like a racer. It rhymes and is exciting and doesn't stop for breath. I like it.10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,157 Points Valsa George (5/5/2013 9:13:00 AM)

    This message has great relevance at a time when people withdraw to their own narrow shells. Opening up and showing the willingness to listen to and care for others makes life meaningful, no matter we win or lose the battle! Let this message ring from all corners! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Allen Steble (5/5/2013 8:52:00 AM)

    Very motivational poem, nicely done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 30, 2015

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