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Lyn Paul

Veteran Poet - 3,493 Points (17.03.1965)

WIN THE BATTLE


Read my words, hear my voice,
Understand in life... There is a choice.
A choice to grow in life to succeed.
Or a choice to burn, just swallow and bleed.
The power is yours. It's about never giving in.
Fighting for life. You need to win.
Winning is not the be all. Yet it is if you need to survive.
And it is if you are feeling... you are no longer alive.
What is it that makes us strong. Then stronger each day?
It is the beauty of life no matter how grey along the way.
Open up and share, Let everyone in,
This is the way, ...the way for us all to win.
Win the Battle of the change of living as the world each day is to grow,
The pure amazement of now..... Now and tomorrow.
So grow and listen to eachothers voices.
Understand the need to accept eachothers choices.


'WHAT THE WORLD NEEDS NOW'




Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Submitted: Sunday, May 05, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, May 06, 2014

Topic of this poem: life


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  • Freshman - 1,035 Points Kanav Justa (12/10/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    So grow and listen to eachothers voices.
    Understand the need to accept eachothers choices

    so true, , , , (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 812 Points Unwritten Soul (5/11/2013 6:13:00 AM)

    We maybe not stand as soldiers but we are in the battlefield to fight the challenge in life, we feel pain but we can still gain..it just about how strong we are inside, we can WIN THE BATTLE Lyn..i like the spirit in you! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ace Of Black Hearts (5/5/2013 6:19:00 PM)

    Communication is key, because if you don't understand how can you ever begin to try to accept somebody else's choice. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,953 Points Valerie Dohren (5/5/2013 3:20:00 PM)

    We can't change the past, but we can mould tomorrow and turn the world into a better place. Very good Lyn. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 218 Points David Wood (5/5/2013 10:01:00 AM)

    Your poem bounds along like a racer. It rhymes and is exciting and doesn't stop for breath. I like it.10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,300 Points Valsa George (5/5/2013 9:13:00 AM)

    This message has great relevance at a time when people withdraw to their own narrow shells. Opening up and showing the willingness to listen to and care for others makes life meaningful, no matter we win or lose the battle! Let this message ring from all corners! ! (Report) Reply

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