Ernestine Northover

Rookie - 412 Points (25th March 1943)

Wind Song - Poem by Ernestine Northover

The wind whistles eerily, as the storm approaches,
it gradually encroaches, taking over
like some unscrupulous military machine,
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Comments about Wind Song by Ernestine Northover

  • Rookie R H (4/8/2008 3:30:00 PM)

    A wonderful metaphor for all that life hurls evocatively captured amongst an array of evocative lines that transport the reader from the tempestuous to the tranquil - superb Ernestine. j xx (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (9/26/2007 1:18:00 AM)

    You have painted a wonderful series of contrasting landscapes for your reader - from the wind as 'unscrupulous military machine, giving way to no one', to the peaceful and refreshing sparkle after the storm has passed. The whole piece represents a metaphor for life's journey as Tailor says. Superb penning. love, Allie xxxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Tailor Bell (11/24/2006 2:41:00 AM)

    storms of our journey in life...captured and released for us to see in this excellent work. beautiful, Ernestine. -Tailor (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 42,937 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/2/2006 8:10:00 PM)

    Poetess E.>>>Yowzer! Felt like Iwas comin' down with th' Flu after comin' out from yir Stormy Weather, there, young lady! Vivid imagework & fine structure
    adds up to a knock-out Piece of Work'''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,252 Points Melvina Germain (8/29/2006 1:23:00 AM)

    'The clouds part and the sun peeps through' what an awesome picture, wonderful poem as usual-------Melvina (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Scarlett Treat (8/2/2006 12:03:00 PM)

    Funny, Wind Song used to be a favorite perfume of mine! And now, we are under such a terrible heat wave that I wish to hear that Wind Song and have it bring us some rain....what a love smell fresh rain leaves, better than any perfume in a bottle! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (2/6/2006 1:53:00 PM)

    Then suddenly, the sky starts to brighten,
    the clouds part and the sun peeps through.Love Duncan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bill Mitton (1/11/2006 5:25:00 PM)

    Ernestine, this is so good! I can feel the force of the wind, and then just like at sea the gentle pink of the sky and the silence as though nature is offering an apology...........wonderful

    Bill M (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 582 Points Uriah Hamilton (12/9/2005 8:29:00 AM)

    I agree with Mary, you write very well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Darbyshire (12/9/2005 1:59:00 AM)

    Nice Ernestine, very nice, you should be a weather broadcaster.....very real....Have a great weekend davexxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mary Nagy (12/8/2005 8:10:00 PM)

    Ernestine, you are such a wonderful writer! I'm always so glad to see your ''perspective'' on any topic. Great poem. Sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Cj Heck (12/8/2005 5:35:00 PM)

    Excellent, Ernestine. Like with most of your work, your words are woven, intricately painting your landscapes so your readers can 'see'. Wonderful ability you have.
    Hugs and respect,
    CJ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lucy Burrow (12/8/2005 5:03:00 PM)

    I know what you mean Sally, another excellent poem from Ernestine, weather is a great leveller, and we are powerless against it!
    regards, Lucy (Report) Reply










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